Welcome back to my blog, today I'm going to share you what we have been doing while writing time. This post was suppose to be posted last week.
WALT: - Use my six senses to describe characters, places, feeling ect.
- Build a strong picture in our readers head.
- Use strong ideas when writing.
We have to use the six senses to make a picture in the readers mind with our writing. The six senses are... Sight, sound, smell, taste, emotions and touch.
Miss Leonard started off a story and we have to finish it. We also have words that we need to include in our story. The words are... Chilling, forbidden, hesitant. unfocused and fascinating.
I haven't finished my story but here is my story:
I could hear the thunder, booming in the sky. Suddenly the lights went out and the room went pitch black. I didn’t know where to go. I could feel that something bad was going to happen. I was feeling hesitant.
After a while the lights suddenly came back on. The lights were so bright, as bright as the stars. I went to my bedroom and sat on the nice comfy chair. I was just chilling and doing my homework properly. I stopped working and went downstairs to get a nice hot chocolate. I went upstairs with my hot chocolate. The hot chocolate was so hot and I could feel it with my hands.
I got to my room and put the warm hot chocolate in a desk. The hot chocolate tasted so yummy.
I worked and worked and worked. I accidentally pushed my hot chocolate.
Questions:
-Have you ever used the six senses?
Thank you for reading this blog post and please give me a feedback! I hope you have enjoyed my story bye!
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