Welcome back to my blog post. Today I'm gonna be showing you what we have been learning on writing time!
We have been learning to write a descriptive narrative, using the five senses. The five senses are smell, hear, feel/emotion, touch. By using the 5 sense it will make your writing more powerful and people will get interesting reading it. Also we have been learning how to change the I to The.
Here is an example of a I sentence: I got a Kete card from Keri
Here is an example of a The sentence: The kete card I got is for working quietly.
This is my descriptive paragraph: A nasty smoke wafted from the uber drivers car.
Here is an example of a I sentence: I got a Kete card from Keri
Here is an example of a The sentence: The kete card I got is for working quietly.
This is my descriptive paragraph: A nasty smoke wafted from the uber drivers car.
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