Hello readers, and viewers!
Welcome back to my amazing blog post! It's Term 4!
: WALT :
-Use strong ideas when writing-
-Eliminate unnecessary ideas and words-
-Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important-
Miss D made a short sentence and we have to carry the story on. BUT, we have to include strong words.
: The words are :
: Here is my 100 word writing :
My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop. A grey car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside me. I kept walking and walking in a blustery weather outside. I started to have a terrible headache because of the rain. I was so tired that I started to feel disillusioned and fragile. I started to run straight home and changed my clothes because of the terrible blustery rain. Minutes passed the rain stopped, the dark, scary cloud turned into a blue, happy, joyful cloud! Outside the window there was an exquisite rainbow up the sky that made me happy forever!
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