WALT- Write procedure (How to make a hot chocolate)
Here is my instructions about how to make a hot chocolate
Friday 10 August 2018
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared.
2. Helpful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what I had to say
3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning? Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Sis! First of all, I loved how you layout it, and also the fonts are readable. I also loved the way you said in the step 1 that "get a parent to help you to boiled the milk, because what if kids want to make it and they don't know how to boil milk, they might get hurt or something. In other words you care about children safety.
ReplyDeleteWhat a wonderful work Rheanne, I also like it because the background related to what your talking about. Perhaps you can use another word instead of using "Get" all the time, but the others are AMAZING!
Your sis,
-Elisha Mae-
Hi Rheanne my name is Michaela and I really like your hot chocolate blog post it is really cool. next time you should put full-stop after your sentence. But I really like it.
ReplyDeleteThanks Micheala for reminding me, and thanks for a commenting in my blog.
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